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stink_bink_253
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0 posted 2004-01-23 07:25 PM



Momma

Momma is the very best,
like no other, I confess.
She is very, very true
and her eyes are berry blue.
Over all she's very sweet
just like a bird who loves to tweet.
I do not thnk she is a llama
but,,,,she is my momma

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Sunshine
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1 posted 2004-01-23 07:31 PM


Hello Bink! Welcome to Passions!  I hope you find you're having as much fun as your Mom!

Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen?

Juju
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2 posted 2004-01-23 07:34 PM


(:

What a nice poem.
Juju

McLean
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3 posted 2004-01-23 07:35 PM


Heart warming words from the youth...wonderful!

McLean

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4 posted 2004-01-23 07:39 PM


Hey Bink!  You're going to be a writer just like your mom!
Have fun here...okay?
Enjoy yourself....Big hugs!

    In the midst of winter..
I found there lives within me,
    an invincible summer.

stink_bink_253
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5 posted 2004-01-23 07:56 PM


thats very nice of you all and I hope that you all make a lot of good poems too, I hope my momma will let me read some of your poems too.
p.s. thank you
Ronny

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6 posted 2004-01-23 08:03 PM


Hi, and Welcome to Passions we are glad you have joined our circle of friends, and family….

this is precious!


please check your email for a special greeting


Kindly

Greeneyes~

~*~
In your light I learn how to love
In your beauty how to make poems
You dance inside my chest where
no one sees you and that sight becomes art

Martie
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7 posted 2004-01-23 08:05 PM


Very sweet, bink!  Welcome to Passions!
scorpio
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8 posted 2004-01-23 09:27 PM


Great poem bink. I hope you will write more poems to share with us.

believe in what your heart feels...

the_loner_23
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9 posted 2004-01-23 10:08 PM


This is so sweet Bink. Your mom is gonna think so too. Welcome to Passions!!!!!!!!

Cold hands means a warm heart

Michelle_loves_Mike
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10 posted 2004-01-24 06:34 AM


Ronny baby,

Thank you for such a sweet poem. I love you....
by the way,,,,,,don't be afraid to write more!
Michelle (Momma)

I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike

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11 posted 2004-01-24 08:19 AM


hey stink-bink enjoyed your poem.. very sweet
oh and welcome to passions

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12 posted 2004-01-24 08:59 AM




just so sweet

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13 posted 2004-01-24 02:15 PM


YOOOOOOOO, RONNIE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Hey, brother... it's great to see that your mother finally let you onhere.
I hope to rad more of your writing.

Cause in my dreams it's always there
The evil face that twists my mind
And brings me to despair.

iliana
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14 posted 2004-01-24 02:29 PM


Enjoyed!
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15 posted 2004-01-24 03:38 PM


Ronny~
This is a neat poem for a neat mom~

Welcome to our world of words~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

noles1@totcon.com

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16 posted 2004-01-24 03:43 PM






(smiles) Awwwwwwwww, this is sooooooo loving and adorable, sweet friend, and you are her son who will always shine golden and special to her eyes, yay, God Bless You and your whole family, this is a wonderful debut! Welcome to Passions, sweet friend, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your wonderful words, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

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17 posted 2004-01-24 06:20 PM


Hi Ronny,
This is so cute. You are a good writer just like your Momma is. I love this poem.
By the way, I love my Momma too.
Hugs to you,  
Ethel

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