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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines


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Heart To Heart Framed

I see you framed,
in words I treasure
wanting to expose
for all to see.

Today I feel
yesterdays longings
the knots of holding
your touch on me:
.
.
.
.
.

I could...................send you
a card of fancy......design, and words
written by others to express thoughts of
mine, but I would rather the words, come
straight from my heart, no interference, no
prissy parts, only the feelings, inside that I
hold, treasured....and.......wrapped in my
memories of gold...everyday words and
everyday cares...and...everyday
memories together to share,
I would kiss them
in thoughts
and
breeze
them to you, on
the wings of the wind on
the morning's tears, dew...and if
that doesn't touch...the deep within
you, I will send them in moonbeams to
shine upon two, the one in my heart and the
one I wait for...my touching shall travel...'til it
reaches your door, as it unlocks with key the
treasure that.....hides...as.....my whispering
thoughts leave their imprints to guide when
the...morning...sun rises..with me in your
glance..I'll...be........waiting, I will, to
join you...............in dance.

M







"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)
© Copyright 2004 Wynter Bliss - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 01-23-2004 05:05 PM       View Profile for muted   Email muted   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for muted

..and here i was..just about to go to bed..and i had one last look..and there this beauty  of a poem!

its lovely enough without the hearts...but you know that the hearts really give great eye candy....

again i give my sincerest *bow* to you

maureen youre a legend

~Dawn
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2 posted 01-23-2004 05:15 PM       View Profile for garysgirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit garysgirl's Home Page   View IP for garysgirl

Maureen, this is the most beautiful thing.....
even if it wasn't in the shape of hearts, I
would love the words, but the shape makes it
extra special.  
DavePage
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3 posted 01-23-2004 06:54 PM       View Profile for DavePage   Email DavePage   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for DavePage

Beautiful

Just beautiful

Those are incredible words

I will print out if you dont mind

regards

Dave
McLean
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state of marital bliss


4 posted 01-23-2004 06:58 PM       View Profile for McLean   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for McLean

This is so beautiful, in sight and voice.  Spectacular!

McLean
nakdthoughts
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5 posted 01-23-2004 07:26 PM       View Profile for nakdthoughts   Email nakdthoughts   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for nakdthoughts

Thank you, Dawn, I checked back in MM days and I think you were my best fan then..and I see you are once again..thanks

M


Ethel, actually I wrote this ages ago to show Mark Bohanan that I could make my hearts using periods instead of something else he used when we were all creating pattern poetry. I was reading my old poems and loved this one  for valentines day..thought I would bring it to life with a few adjustments. I use to be MMoonchild on here when I first came and some of my favorite poems are from then.
Thanks
*s
M

Dave, I am glad you like it. Sure, you may print it out.

McLean, I am  happy you enjoyed it.
Thank you,
Maureen
SmartChick
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On A Journey To The Unknown


6 posted 01-23-2004 07:28 PM       View Profile for SmartChick   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit SmartChick's Home Page   View IP for SmartChick

Wow! This is just beautiful.
A Romantic Heart
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7 posted 01-24-2004 05:17 AM       View Profile for A Romantic Heart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for A Romantic Heart

This needs to go back up to the top definitely for Valentines day!

Greatly done!

~ARH

Open your eyes, open your mind, open your heart, let me come in and show you love.....~ARH

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8 posted 01-24-2004 06:53 AM       View Profile for Goldenrose   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Goldenrose

I agree with ARH...this should be at the top for valentines...beautiful writng of expresive love..

Thank you for the words...

Goldenrose.


''Each soul is potentialy divine..the goal is to manifest that divinity''
jennirey
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9 posted 01-24-2004 07:37 AM       View Profile for jennirey   Email jennirey   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for jennirey

This was loveley.. The words in the heart are like a wonderful cabernet in fine crystal.

I will put in my favorites if i might

Jen
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Amazing.....totally amazing.......
passing shadows
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11 posted 01-31-2004 01:27 PM       View Profile for passing shadows   Email passing shadows   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for passing shadows

OMG! HOW DID I MISS THIS ONE!

This should be reposted in 31

AWESOME !!!!!
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