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inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392
Ohio

0 posted 2004-01-23 03:29 PM




so heavy
these
thoughts
today

destined
to sink
like
boulders

shaking
the
sea

trying
later to
claim
them

they
drift
with the
snowflakes

the poem
rides the
breeze




[This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (01-23-2004 06:27 PM).]

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Brad Majors
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1 posted 2004-01-23 03:58 PM


well done
DavePage
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since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917

2 posted 2004-01-23 06:11 PM


thoughts can seem like an immense weight or something that lights a smile

My thoughts below

Dave

Speeding
Splashing
Sinking
Promoting life
Surf to snow
Flicked into the athos
To drift gently
To peace

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