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Brigid WillowKeeper
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0 posted 2004-01-23 09:42 AM


I wander through a dead and decaying meadow
And I plant seeds of hope
I pray the grey goes away
And that you'll come back to me
Though you are here
You may aswell not be
All I can do is wait
Wait for the clouds to dissapate
So that I can smile once again

I wander through a green and fragrant meadow
No longer do I plant seeds of hope rather than
Seeds of life
I pray the green stays and that you stay too
Now you once again feel love as I have always loved you
Day by day the green gets richer and my smile grows brighter.
You're my sister and my best friend.

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Susan Caldwell
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1 posted 2004-01-23 09:47 AM


This was very sweet.

Nice tribute.

"sit on top of the world and tell me how you feel...'cause what you feel is what I feel for you.."
~Dido~

Brigid WillowKeeper
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2 posted 2004-01-23 09:49 AM


Thank you, it is about a sister with a mental illness . . . well I am sure you already gathered, lol.
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3 posted 2004-01-23 10:04 AM


... mental illness awareness is something i support whole heartedly...

this is a beautiful way to speak about something that can be very isolating and consuming...

i applaude you

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4 posted 2004-01-23 12:51 PM


oh...I have to show this to my daughters
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5 posted 2004-01-23 02:02 PM


A thoughtful choice in topic that wonderfully captures the emotions of unrelenting love and support. Wonderful!!!
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