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Open Poetry #30

Speak To Me

1slick_lady
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since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2004-01-23 12:58 PM

Speak To Me

speak to me
in French
roll each
letter slowly
tenderly touching
my face
let your lips
tickle mine
in pressing
embrace of
skin whispers
in open prayer

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2004-01-23 01:57 AM

ooo, very sensual....nice

richard taylor
Member

since 2004-01-13

Posts 136

2 posted 2004-01-23 04:15 AM

this is very good.
richard

muted

Member Elite

since 2004-01-15

Posts 2949
Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving

3 posted 2004-01-23 04:24 AM

....oh this is simply sexy!
i like these short ones, so much said in so little words!

lovely

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

4 posted 2004-01-23 01:07 PM

OneSlick~
So softly you turn a phrase~
Exquisite~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

noles1@totcon.com

Ravenwolfvoyager
Member

since 2003-12-25

Posts 326

5 posted 2004-01-23 01:55 PM

Very nice and quite inspiring. A beautiful, romantic write!! I really enjoyed this. Thank you for sharing!!!

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

6 posted 2004-01-23 02:03 PM

Helen, with Canada being bilingual it is easy to be taken away with the language of sensuality, and they could even be saying, they are just taking out the garbage

but I got the idea, and have even felt lost in the moment myself, until slapped back to reality. Awesome comparision.

Life is but a magical mystery
~ Blessed Be ~

Edder
Senior Member

since 2003-04-02

Posts 671

7 posted 2004-01-23 02:06 PM

you do this sooo well...

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