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Juju
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0 posted 01-22-2004 09:42 PM       View Profile for Juju   Email Juju   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Juju's Home Page   View IP for Juju

Words came from my lips
but I heard no sound.
The wind carried them
echoless away.

I felt my hair flow
a ghost of the past...
when will you return
or will you too fly
echoless away

absence is your sword
That cuts in me deep
ghosts words echo not
echoless away

Juju----
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Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving


1 posted 01-23-2004 04:36 AM       View Profile for muted   Email muted   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for muted

.....this is soft, but sad...

very nice
Laoha
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2 posted 01-23-2004 04:59 AM       View Profile for Laoha   Email Laoha   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Laoha

"ghosts words echo not
echoless away"

This is a very fresh way of describing it!


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3 posted 01-23-2004 12:55 PM       View Profile for passing shadows   Email passing shadows   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for passing shadows

kind of sad
Marge Tindal
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4 posted 01-23-2004 01:35 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

JuJu~
This is just wonderful !!!!
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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Juju
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5 posted 01-23-2004 07:32 PM       View Profile for Juju   Email Juju   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Juju's Home Page   View IP for Juju

I am pleased you like my poem!
(:

Juju
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6 posted 03-27-2004 04:22 AM       View Profile for iliana   Email iliana   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for iliana

Juju, this was such a tender write.  
Juju
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7 posted 04-27-2004 05:22 PM       View Profile for Juju   Email Juju   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Juju's Home Page   View IP for Juju

oh thank you, sorry fore the delay.
Love juju
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8 posted 05-02-2004 10:45 AM       View Profile for cusick   Email cusick   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for cusick

Juju this a lovely poem said in so few words. I really liked it. Maggie
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9 posted 01-20-2005 07:08 PM       View Profile for Juju   Email Juju   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Juju's Home Page   View IP for Juju

thank you Maggie

Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic

The dictionary never lies.... I am magical (;

 
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