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Open Poetry #30

Consumed by Fire

Amature2
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since 2001-01-08

Posts 416

0 posted 2004-01-22 08:17 PM

Consumed by Fire

In the rubble of existence
Lie the remnants of subsistence
Once a tree of fruitful desire
Has become consumed by fire

"Everybody's lost
But they're pretending they're not
Lost"........Morrissey

J.Samm
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since 2004-01-12

Posts 415
Iloilo City, Philippines

1 posted 2004-01-22 08:23 PM

intriguing. oh tell me, why was it consumed by fire? write on!

Amature2
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since 2001-01-08

Posts 416

2 posted 2004-01-22 08:30 PM

J.Samm,

It may have outlived its purpose
It may have succumbed to solitude
And in its smoke it will soar higher
After it is Consumed by Fire

J.Samm
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since 2004-01-12

Posts 415
Iloilo City, Philippines

3 posted 2004-01-22 08:40 PM

very inspiring! well done! thank you amature2!

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

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4 posted 2004-01-23 01:01 PM

this is beautiful but sad too

Ravenwolfvoyager
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since 2003-12-25

Posts 326

5 posted 2004-01-23 01:58 PM

It surely instills the respect we have for nature does it not. Excellent write and an excellent point!! You need to change your handle from Amature to something more suiting for you truly do not appear to me an an amature.

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