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mfchild
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since 2003-12-28
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0 posted 2004-01-22 04:41 PM


YUR

verse 1.
2 desccribe
the nature of u (wonderful)
is beyond the reach of art
no words can justify
the softness of your heart
I'd slay all the serpents
who lay hidden in the grass
whose only move is in the dark
2 harm you cause,

chorus
ur face (wonderful)
is the suns everyday birth
which brings light 2 the earth
ur lips (wonderful)
are the first step to adoration
fantasies follow with consumation
ur wings (wonderful)
are our strongest security
from our nakedness
onto our clothed maturity
your body (wonderful)
is the liquid air in the sky
which form u my
wonderful, wonderful, wonderful
u.................

verse 2
creator of all things
u bring only the purest
of colors out
if not 4 u
man would have no sincerity
to shar about
I worship ur presence
4 bringing me
the drummer in my chest

chorus
ur face (wonderful)
is the suns everyday birth
which brings light 2 the earth
ur lips (wonderful)
are the first step to adoration
fantasies follow with consumation
ur wings (wonderful)
are our strongest security
from our nakedness
onto our clothed maturity
your body (wonderful)
is the liquid air in the sky
which form u my
wonderful, wonderful, wonderful
u.................

bridge
birds envy ur voice
4 this is the reason
every morning they sing
an orchestra couldn't imitate
with all the instruments combined
there would still be
something missing

lyrics by: Paris Mark Toon 4 ButterScotch Blue publishing © 1995-2004 www.mothersfavoritechild.com


© Copyright 2004 Paris Mark Toon - All Rights Reserved
Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
1 posted 2004-01-22 05:40 PM


Enjoyed reading this.

ur face (wonderful)
is the suns everyday birth


Lovely.
Margherita

2writeis2be
Junior Member
since 2004-01-11
Posts 45
Live in London, but from TX
2 posted 2004-01-22 06:02 PM


this reminds me of stuff E.E.Cummings wrote. He's one of my favorite poets--retains a style all his own. If u haven't, read some of his work.
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