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Kethry
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0 posted 2004-01-22 03:28 PM


This is about Jay it is an update of what is happening. If you want to find out more about hypothalamic harmotomas (HH) you could check out this site. www.hhugs.com

When giggles shrill erupt from me
it's not that I am filled with glee;
it's not that laughter fills the air
but more a seizure gives this stare
don't look at me - I laugh out loud
and show my temper in a crowd

Don't think that I am being rude
or that I mind this anger crude
my head sends thoughts – they're not my own
and strangers leave me well alone
I scream and yell; it's not my fault
if overwhelmed, I long to bolt

Deep in myself I know what's wrong
this growth has taken all my song
frustrated rage is all you see
you see my problems - don't see me
here deep inside my damaged shell
I'm just a boy who is unwell.

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
1 posted 2004-01-22 04:01 PM


this growth has taken all my song
frustrated rage is all you see
you see my problems - don't see me


aww Lynne, I do hope they can  find some way of alleviating Jay's problem...

hugsss
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Justbleu
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2 posted 2004-01-22 04:03 PM


So sad and too true!!!!
Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again.  To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown


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Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving
3 posted 2004-01-22 04:03 PM


...i enjoy this because it's educating people..

thanks for the lesson

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4 posted 2004-01-22 06:25 PM


Oh, my friend... you've written this so well... Every heart you've touched will be kinder... that I know. *S*
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