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                 Painful Distances

                 Circle Us Harshly

   AROUND             AROUND            AROUND


                  Can you feel the radius?


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This one's short and different. What do you guys think?

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1 posted 2004-01-22 02:12 PM


yes, but two forces brought together by gravity will eventually lose orbit and collide...just takes patience..

i liked this

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