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Distant Thunder |
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Neeraja Senior Member
since 2002-06-22
Posts 812The Netherlands 
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DISTANT THUNDER It’s not the silence that frightens me nor the storm of my emotions or my frozen tears but the rolling sound of a distant thunder forming the words the end!!! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Oh yes, you convey the feelings here powerfully. But every end calls forth a new beginning. Love, Margherita |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Neeraja, Yes, sometimes ends can go on forever. Well done. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
you said it perfectly |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
ditto Dixies sentiments. well done. |
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richard taylor Member
since 2004-01-13
Posts 136 |
neeraja I realy like the flow which is perfect in your poem, very fine work indeed. take care richard. |
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