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Suetang
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0 posted 2004-01-22 12:46 PM



Picture by Josephine Wall

* * *

I have just heard today that my
Uncle is in hospital with cancer
of the brain and it is also in
other parts of his body.They are
not sure whether they can operate.
I wrote this poem through a sea
of tears so it probably isn't
any good.I immediately thought
of my father when I got the news
and he helped to guide my pen
as I wrote this.

* * *

Heaven only takes the good ones
And that's why you are there
But I miss your loving presence
Some days can be so hard to bear

I often walk along the shore
And search high above the blue
I take great comfort in my words
For they keep me close to you

My life has moved along
So much richer I've become
I feel you whisper through the trees
And feel your warmth in the sun

Not a single day goes by
When I don't feel you near
A part of me is missing
To me you were so very dear

I know I should move forward
That's what you'd want me to do
But for now I'll sit in silence
As I stop and think of you

* * *

"We sat together for what seemed
like hours without saying a single word.
Our hearts were so finely tuned
to one another that we felt
no need to speak"


I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

© Copyright 2004 Sue Tancheff - All Rights Reserved
J.Samm
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1 posted 2004-01-22 12:50 PM


you poured it out beautifully...it's like a symphony...and yes, heaven does take the good ones
Michelle_loves_Mike
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2 posted 2004-01-22 08:45 AM


It is good, and heartfelt,,,,hugs to you,,,,and, yes, it also made me think of my father as well,,,,
Michelle

I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike

icebox
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3 posted 2004-01-22 08:53 AM


A very touching write.  Thank you for sharing it.

I guess if heaven only takes the good ones, I better arrange to be buried with lots of marshmallows to toast.  *grin*

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4 posted 2004-01-22 08:59 AM


omg...this is absolutely beautiful...I am sorry for your bad news and will keep your uncle in my prayers...

"Painting is poetry which is seen and not heard, and poetry is a painting which is heard but not seen." ~Leonardo da Vinci

Goldenrose
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5 posted 2004-01-22 09:24 AM


May i express my very best wishes to you and to all of your family at this very difficuly time....may love fill your heart forever...

Really enjoyed the heartfelt and loving poem Sue...written in the most difficult of circunstances ...makes it even more well written....thank you for sharing.....

Goldenrose.

''Each soul is potentialy divine..the goal is to manifest that divinity''

richard taylor
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6 posted 2004-01-22 10:41 AM


God bless you and yours
richard.

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7 posted 2004-01-22 11:43 AM


*hugging gently*


passing shadows
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8 posted 2004-01-22 12:50 PM


oh God! How touching!

makes me think of mom


Martie
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9 posted 2004-01-22 01:30 PM


Sue

It is not easy to say goodbye.  I'm so glad that your father's spirit is still close enough to give you some comfort.  Hugs!

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