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wickedbeautifulpoetry
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since 2004-01-03
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Indiana, USA

0 posted 2004-01-21 10:10 PM


Sometimes I wonder
If you hear my
Lethargic squalls
Calling for you
Weary
For they are
Wonted
To wanting you
Do you hear my
Silently shrill screams
Signals of my
Secret yearnings
Sirens
Alert you to my
Cravings for you
Can you hear them?

Strong and forceful
Though still
Drooping with fatigue
I have wandered
The pampas of lonesomeness
Prairies of solitude
Searching high and low
For a plateau
Upon which you stand
A safety for me
But I have waited
Too long
My limbs are weak

Drowning in rivers
Of perspiration
Precipitation of my determinedness
I have swum
In seas of my own
Tears, sweat, and desire
Swept into the tides of angst
Riding the waves
With seasoned expertise
Diving to the deepest depths
Of my manmade ocean
Experienced at full velocity
The onslaught of emotion
That is coveting you

I have lurked
In the damnable hells
Of depression and untamed anger
I am waiting there for you
To rescue me
Pull me up to your ecstasy
Contentment and exhilaration aplenty
In the bliss of being near you

© Copyright 2004 Katie - All Rights Reserved
wickedbeautifulpoetry
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since 2004-01-03
Posts 84
Indiana, USA
1 posted 2004-01-21 10:17 PM


I haven't posted on here in a while, and I'm looking forward to some feedback!

Thanks,
Katie.

J.Samm
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since 2004-01-12
Posts 415
Iloilo City, Philippines
2 posted 2004-01-21 10:17 PM


so intense, i could feel the yearning!
Justbleu
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since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329
Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)
3 posted 2004-01-21 10:18 PM


You captured your feelings well and expressed them beautifully!!!  I can see the words come easily here!!!!
Take Care!!!!
Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again.  To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown


wickedbeautifulpoetry
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since 2004-01-03
Posts 84
Indiana, USA
4 posted 2004-01-21 10:23 PM


Thanks a lot, J. Samm, Justbleu.
I appreciate it!

-Katie-

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