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GG
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Lost in thought

0 posted 2004-01-21 10:05 PM



Dreams are repercussions
Of fights to do and die...
Endings of discussions
When I try to make up lies.

Because belief makes
Things come true,
And I can’t deal
Missing you.

Doctors lie
On some days too,
And God has played
A trick or two
On me before...
I’d love to hear him
Lie once more.

He was a man of sorrows
...I am a girl of tears.

© Copyright 2004 GG - All Rights Reserved
Justbleu
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1 posted 2004-01-21 10:08 PM


Understood!!!!
Full of deep feeling!!!
Keep on writing!!!
Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again.  To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown


J.Samm
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2 posted 2004-01-21 10:33 PM


so meaningful. i especially liked this part--
"And God has played
A trick or two
On me before...
I’d love to hear him
Lie once more."

Mistletoe Angel
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3 posted 2004-01-21 11:42 PM




(smiles) Just because He played a trick on you doesn't mean He lied, as He has a plan and serendipity helps us see it all closer and more dear! (big angel hugs) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Alyssa, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

Kahlil
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4 posted 2004-01-22 12:47 PM


mm hmm
I'm with ya
~K~

GG
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5 posted 2004-01-22 02:43 AM


I really should have written a bit of a disclaimer to this before I posted it. Though a poem really only has value where and how the reader finds value in it, don't want to mix anyone up on what I think.
I know God doesn't lie, I'm just having trouble understanding how some of his promises work. Recently I've been told that my best friend, brother, and teacher is dying... quickly. And I'm sort of just waiting for that dream from Him to happen now. I'm wishing that God and the doctor were lying about it all...

He was a man of sorrows
...I am a girl of tears.

GG
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6 posted 2004-01-22 02:45 AM


Bridgette,
Thank you much and, I think I will!

J,
I always love knowing what parts people like the most, thanks!

Always, Alyssa

He was a man of sorrows
...I am a girl of tears.

GG
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7 posted 2004-01-22 02:49 AM


Noah,
he's just real good with irony! Thanks for your reply, always sweet.

kahlil,
thank you glad you replied.

Always, Alyssa

He was a man of sorrows
...I am a girl of tears.

passing shadows
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8 posted 2004-01-22 03:32 AM


Alyssa, I'm right with ya! God just doesn't make sense sometimes.
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9 posted 2004-01-22 08:49 AM


True,,,you can never give up,,,,,Mother Nature has a way of out doing doctors and gods
Michelle

I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike

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10 posted 2004-01-22 09:28 AM


My heart breaks for you...your brother is in my prayers...

"Painting is poetry which is seen and not heard, and poetry is a painting which is heard but not seen." ~Leonardo da Vinci

GG
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11 posted 2004-01-25 01:00 AM


Dix,
hardly ever!  He has a twisted sense of humor and irony, and I guess seeing the whole picture makes it easier for Him.. and more confusing for us... Thanks for your reply

Michelle,
God is my creator and Savior. Thanks for reading, and thanks for your reply...

Kirstie,
thanks so much... he certainly does need them =-/

Always, Alyssa

He was a man of sorrows
...I am a girl of tears.

iliana
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12 posted 2004-03-25 09:55 PM


GG, I cannot believe you are not older as you show such maturity in your writing.  
GG
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13 posted 2004-04-18 02:40 PM


iliana,
wow, didn't expect a reply for the things back here! Thanks so much for your reply. And thank you for the compliment, too...

Always, Alyssa

He was a man of sorrows
...I am a girl of tears.

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