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GG
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Lost in thought


0 posted 01-21-2004 10:05 PM       View Profile for GG   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for GG


Dreams are repercussions
Of fights to do and die...
Endings of discussions
When I try to make up lies.

Because belief makes
Things come true,
And I cant deal
Missing you.

Doctors lie
On some days too,
And God has played
A trick or two
On me before...
Id love to hear him
Lie once more.

He was a man of sorrows
...I am a girl of tears.

© Copyright 2004 GG - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 01-21-2004 10:08 PM       View Profile for Justbleu   Email Justbleu   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Justbleu's Home Page   View IP for Justbleu

Understood!!!!
Full of deep feeling!!!
Keep on writing!!!
Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again.  To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown

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2 posted 01-21-2004 10:33 PM       View Profile for J.Samm   Email J.Samm   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit J.Samm's Home Page   View IP for J.Samm

so meaningful. i especially liked this part--
"And God has played
A trick or two
On me before...
Id love to hear him
Lie once more."
Mistletoe Angel
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3 posted 01-21-2004 11:42 PM       View Profile for Mistletoe Angel   Email Mistletoe Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Mistletoe Angel's Home Page   View IP for Mistletoe Angel



(smiles) Just because He played a trick on you doesn't mean He lied, as He has a plan and serendipity helps us see it all closer and more dear! (big angel hugs) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Alyssa, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

Kahlil
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4 posted 01-22-2004 12:47 AM       View Profile for Kahlil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kahlil

mm hmm
I'm with ya
~K~
GG
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5 posted 01-22-2004 02:43 AM       View Profile for GG   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for GG

I really should have written a bit of a disclaimer to this before I posted it. Though a poem really only has value where and how the reader finds value in it, don't want to mix anyone up on what I think.
I know God doesn't lie, I'm just having trouble understanding how some of his promises work. Recently I've been told that my best friend, brother, and teacher is dying... quickly. And I'm sort of just waiting for that dream from Him to happen now. I'm wishing that God and the doctor were lying about it all...

He was a man of sorrows
...I am a girl of tears.

GG
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6 posted 01-22-2004 02:45 AM       View Profile for GG   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for GG

Bridgette,
Thank you much and, I think I will!

J,
I always love knowing what parts people like the most, thanks!

Always, Alyssa

He was a man of sorrows
...I am a girl of tears.

GG
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7 posted 01-22-2004 02:49 AM       View Profile for GG   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for GG

Noah,
he's just real good with irony! Thanks for your reply, always sweet.

kahlil,
thank you glad you replied.

Always, Alyssa

He was a man of sorrows
...I am a girl of tears.

passing shadows
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8 posted 01-22-2004 03:32 AM       View Profile for passing shadows   Email passing shadows   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for passing shadows

Alyssa, I'm right with ya! God just doesn't make sense sometimes.
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9 posted 01-22-2004 08:49 AM       View Profile for Michelle_loves_Mike   Email Michelle_loves_Mike   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michelle_loves_Mike

True,,,you can never give up,,,,,Mother Nature has a way of out doing doctors and gods
Michelle

I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike

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10 posted 01-22-2004 09:28 AM       View Profile for KristieSue   Email KristieSue   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit KristieSue's Home Page   View IP for KristieSue

My heart breaks for you...your brother is in my prayers...

"Painting is poetry which is seen and not heard, and poetry is a painting which is heard but not seen." ~Leonardo da Vinci

GG
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11 posted 01-25-2004 01:00 AM       View Profile for GG   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for GG

Dix,
hardly ever!  He has a twisted sense of humor and irony, and I guess seeing the whole picture makes it easier for Him.. and more confusing for us... Thanks for your reply

Michelle,
God is my creator and Savior. Thanks for reading, and thanks for your reply...

Kirstie,
thanks so much... he certainly does need them =-/

Always, Alyssa

He was a man of sorrows
...I am a girl of tears.

iliana
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12 posted 03-25-2004 09:55 PM       View Profile for iliana   Email iliana   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for iliana

GG, I cannot believe you are not older as you show such maturity in your writing.  
GG
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13 posted 04-18-2004 02:40 PM       View Profile for GG   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for GG

iliana,
wow, didn't expect a reply for the things back here! Thanks so much for your reply. And thank you for the compliment, too...

Always, Alyssa

He was a man of sorrows
...I am a girl of tears.

 
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