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RedStoneEB
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since 2003-06-08
Posts 772
uk

0 posted 2004-01-21 06:03 PM



Do you hear me?
you’ve seen my tears fall
don’t you hear me crying
Im falling to the floor

Do you hear me now?
can’t you see the pain you’ve caused

I breath you in
you breathe me out
my heart wants yours
but you’re pushing me down

Too many memories
Ive kept hidden inside
now fading in the tide
washed away by tears I’ve cried

© Copyright 2004 Lee Hepworth - All Rights Reserved
A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart
1 posted 2004-01-21 09:22 PM


I hear you and I have cried a few tears myself!

~ARH

Open your eyes, open your mind, open your heart, let me come in and show you love.....~ARH

Justbleu
Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329
Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)
2 posted 2004-01-21 10:14 PM


Let those tears free you and clense you and wash away the pain!!!!
Lovely writing!!!!
Take Care!!!!
Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again.  To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown


pammy
Member
since 2003-11-27
Posts 50
California
3 posted 2004-02-28 07:07 PM


Once again i say awesome.!!! It often helps to just let the tears fall..they often help cleanse the emotional wounds of our past.
GOOD JOB!!!

~*Pammy*~
“The brave may not live for long,
but the sheltered never live at all”

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