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Morning Walk [haiku]
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Morning Walk [haiku] |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
Morning walk; |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
...you are such a gentle poet.. quickly becoming one of my favorites.. you go ahead and leave those footprints behind, cause if you walk far enough..you'll see me waving ya down... then we can just make a mess of the snow, footprints and all!  oh you are such a simple pleasure"...and longed to kiss her hand an lie a thousand summers at her feet." ~excerpt A.L. Tennyson |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
Morning walk; no footprints in the snow- but those left behind. beneath these snowprints, those who walked this path before have i been born yet? |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
~M, you are just too kind... then we can just make a mess of the snow, footprints and all!......then certainly we would be two "angels in the snow"
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Wonderful Paul...very much enjoyed! Hugs~ In the midst of winter.. |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
Morning walk; no footprints in the snow- but those left behind. beneath these snowprints, those who walked this path before have i been born yet? Beyond birth and death on this trackless path we wander. |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
 wow, oh you and Inkedgoddess should keep writing that...would love to see how far you take it (oh and i'll just tell ya ~C my name is Dawn) |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
wow, oh you and Inkedgoddess should keep writing that...would love to see how far you take it Thank you Dawn, maybe you might feel like adding a link...~C [Paul] |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is precious, sweet friend, I enjoy walking beside you through the serenity of poetry, yay, always feel free to walk with me and us all here, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Paul, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
*shaking head in awe* |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
I so enjoy your work, Choshi! |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Paul~ this is so lovely....you do these well ! |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
okay, i'll bite.......lol Morning walk; no footprints in the snow- but those left behind. beneath these snowprints, those who walked this path before have i been born yet? Beyond birth and death on this trackless path we wander. never born, never died without a destiny and yet i long for a face |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
Dixie: *shaking head in awe* *bowing head* in gratitude ~C |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
From Iliana: I so enjoy your work, Choshi! Thank you , Ditto ~C |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
Greeneyes: this is so lovely....you do these well ! Thank you Greeneyes, sometimes one gets lucky...~C |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
okay, i'll bite.......lol Morning walk; no footprints in the snow- but those left behind. beneath these snowprints, those who walked this path before have i been born yet? Beyond birth and death on this trackless path we wander. never born, never died without a destiny and yet i long for a face Midnight: moonlight on her face softer than a sigh. |
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Michelle_loves_Mike
since 2003-12-20
Posts 1189Pennsylvania |
To be the first to break the snow,,,,,,a quiet serene peace,,,, Michelle I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
eh, couldn´t resist to bite too Morning walk; no footprints in the snow- but those left behind. beneath these snowprints, those who walked this path before have i been born yet? Beyond birth and death on this trackless path we wander. never born, never died without a destiny and yet i long for a face Midnight: moonlight on her face softer than a sigh Serenity Absorb scratches Of a night owl |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
Morning walk; no footprints in the snow- but those left behind. beneath these snowprints, those who walked this path before have i been born yet? Beyond birth and death on this trackless path we wander. never born, never died without a destiny and yet i long for a face Inkedgoddess, Charisma, Choshi....and.... Midnight: |
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