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Open Poetry #30

Thoughts, Incomplete

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

0 posted 2004-01-21 12:26 PM

Naked of Kiss

Naked of kiss,
these lips travel home
with only memory's confection
to taste.

I'll fashion you the will
to fuse those confessions
in sacrifice, the value of
these naked lips
in penalty of kiss.

Delusion them complete,
lips upon night's whisper.
Forget-me-not
in want.

M

muted

Member Elite

since 2004-01-15

Posts 2949
Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving

1 posted 2004-01-21 12:30 PM

"Naked of kiss,
these lips travel home
with only memory's confection
to taste."

"Forget-me-not
in want."

~*~ the words here are well "tasty"!
wow, like ive said before, you put things in a new perspective for me...and i like seeing things from a different view.

oh, i think im gonna keep this one!

Dawn

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2004-01-21 12:40 PM

beautiful

choshi
Senior Member

since 2004-01-01

Posts 1184
New York

3 posted 2004-01-21 12:42 PM

Stirring, ..Indeed, ~C

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

4 posted 2004-01-22 04:21 PM

well..one should never leave another
without a lasting kiss

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