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Jason Lyle
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since 2003-02-07
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With my darkling

0 posted 2004-01-21 10:10 AM


Dear God, a prayer
for one more chance
a common prayer
and now we dance

a point of pride
to not submit
a point inside
will not admit

dear God, a Prayer
to understand
Redeem ones self
and start again

and reason speaks
to many things
but then grows weak
fore king of kings

So one more time
Dear God, I'll pray
for proof of you
to light my way

and if its not
for you to say
I'll simply make
my pain my prey



© Copyright 2004 Jason Lyle - All Rights Reserved
richard taylor
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since 2004-01-13
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1 posted 2004-01-21 10:52 AM


hi I liked the prayer,well done
Richard

Terrina
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since 2003-12-31
Posts 166
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2 posted 2004-01-21 11:11 AM


This is outstanding.
I love the last line,

I'll make my pain my prey.

Wow, that's great.

GG
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since 2002-12-03
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Lost in thought
3 posted 2004-01-21 06:38 PM


It seems to me, the most proof I've been given was only after I believed and lived off of that...
I love this

Always, Alyssa

He was a man of sorrows
...I am a girl of tears.

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since 2001-08-31
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just out of reach
4 posted 2004-01-21 07:25 PM


Well done Jason! Enjoyed. Chris

"At one glance
I love you
With a thousand hearts."


— Mihri Hatun, Turkish poet



    

Justbleu
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since 1999-08-31
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Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)
5 posted 2004-01-21 08:07 PM


Enjoyed!!!!
A thought provoking prayer!!!
I believe it's all about what's meant to be!!!!
Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again.  To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown


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