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darkness_witch
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since 2003-12-03
Posts 516
Underneath

0 posted 2004-01-21 12:39 PM


Feel the beat
As it pounds through our bodies

Feel the bass
As it rocks our bodies

Hear the guitar
As it squels through the room

Hear the lyrics
As it tempts our ears

Alive we are

Let the music take us away
Let the music feed our love
Let the music...

Alive we are

Play with my mind
Lie to me like its all true
Tell me the music will save me
Tell me the music will save it all

Alive we are

Take me to a place
Where the lyrics are true
Where the music  it true
So rich and luxurious it is

Alive we are

As the beat fades out
As the bass dies away
As the guitar zones out
As the lyrics dimish away

I realise the truth
Its all lies
The music is fiction
The lyrics are fiction

Are we alive?


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silhouetted
Senior Member
since 2004-01-30
Posts 537
New Zealand
1 posted 2004-02-04 02:01 AM


lool soph!!!
That one rocked the TOWN
lol cant beleve no one replied!!
cyer ALLLL

Silhouetted by Deception

Grover
Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967
London, ON, Canada
2 posted 2004-03-11 01:27 PM


Some haunting questions here.
aussie teen
Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 396
Australia
3 posted 2004-04-02 05:01 AM


this is amazing and completely true.....
how is it we truly know we are alive....???
because we have love anger pain???? or something else....
how will we ever feel truly alive??
nice questions you are getting people thinking of...
keep up the writing.
Mel

so this is me but what do you care about that????

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