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the_loner_23
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0 posted 2004-01-20 10:42 PM


you got to bed
And it is still clear
As a bell outside

In the middle of the night
You roll over in bed
Open your eyes
For just one moment

You put your ear to the window
And you hear the rain
Coming down softly outside
And it slowly puts you back to sleep

Cold hands means a warm heart

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ThunderMage
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1 posted 2004-01-20 11:27 PM


I know that feeling.

What is life without poetry and adventure?
"Little sister" is just another way of saying "Guardian Angel"!

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2 posted 2004-01-21 02:05 AM


and that is one of the best feelings!
all curled up in the blanket listening to *patterings*....this is nice...

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3 posted 2004-01-21 08:55 AM


Rain and slumber go very well together do they not :-) You did well the loner! Keep up the great work.
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4 posted 2004-01-21 09:09 AM



Julie, a very nice poem.  Thank you
for sharing your early morning rain.

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5 posted 2004-01-21 09:25 AM


oh yes even I recognized these feelings....thank you for sharing your morning rain

Charisma

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6 posted 2004-01-21 10:17 AM


enjoyed
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7 posted 2004-01-21 11:22 AM


I love the rain.  very well done Julie.
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8 posted 2004-01-21 11:39 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwww, those natural sounds are what sets me to sleep more peacefully than anything other, sweet friend, God Bless You, Mother Nature will be my wake-up call, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Julie, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

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9 posted 2004-01-22 12:20 PM


I love rain...nice Julie

~*~
In your light I learn how to love
In your beauty how to make poems
You dance inside my chest where
no one sees you and that sight becomes art

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10 posted 2004-01-22 12:39 PM


makes the whole world kin! well written.

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