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Effigy
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since 04-11-2000
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Just sitting at the computer


0 posted 01-20-2004 10:20 PM       View Profile for Effigy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Effigy

Don t look now.  

But I killed myself just moments ago.

It was but emotional, mental, ideological,
and only slightly physical suicide.

A pen through the heart.

          A stare through the soul.

A crumbling of faith.

          A lack of options.

All things end.
- I am not me anymore.

               - end of transmition -
© Copyright 2004 Effigy - All Rights Reserved
wordwizard
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since 09-08-2003
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on the way to next world


1 posted 01-20-2004 11:09 PM       View Profile for wordwizard   Email wordwizard   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for wordwizard

I also noticed there weren't any replies...what a pity, this is a good teaser
and there should be more in your face stuff like this I think

the_loner_23
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2 posted 01-20-2004 11:09 PM       View Profile for the_loner_23   Email the_loner_23   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for the_loner_23

Very interesting poem but I liked it.

Cold hands means a warm heart

forne_marin
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Spartanburg, South Carolina


3 posted 05-14-2004 10:16 AM       View Profile for forne_marin   Email forne_marin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit forne_marin's Home Page   View IP for forne_marin

You know, your use of the Willy Wonka font in this piece made me scratch my head.

I believe the most important component of a poem is rhythm. Rhythm is the heartbeat of a poem. It is what makes poetry poetry.

 
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