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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
These are really 3 poems that described a character in the book I will someday write and are his torrent against his parents *************************************************** His words My love said to me, I am your love to be I've loved you more than I can say But give me your hand And walk to that tree Then I will give my own love to thee" Parents A flush of swirling dress Mists the sense with rest The wind will carry tales from on high One to learned men, One to men that bend And one just for the men that ply His betrayal by his parents I stand in the temple and you are wrong I stand on the hill and shout betrayed I lie in the valley and you walk over me You will never kill me As long as people live, I am the defender of the shadows You ask me for my reasons to love I ask for your love of me, let me love. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
a very profound write.... do we need reason to love? or shall we just? |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
I prefer to leave that as an open question but, but, but, but I prefer to leave that as an open question Dave |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big angel hugs) What makes me afraid is how though no child should be abused and never should be neglected and pity should be brought upon those so-called "parents" who do, that I always fear the anger dominates a child's heart and then they grow to become their parents, depending on how they take the emotions! (wipes tears) I pray that the ultimate conclusion can be the children just feel sadness and can temper the anger away so they can grow to be pure compassionate and open-hearted and forgiving, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Dave, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Thank you for some lovely thoughts Mistletoe Angel Thank you Dave |
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