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Open Poetry #30

Small Imprints

DavePage
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since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

0 posted 2004-01-20 02:24 PM

water gently cascading melting stones to imprints
beauty in miniature rushing over stones that still might roll
sand moving into stone
rushed by fast clear water
to a fresh future
and
another world

garysgirl

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since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

1 posted 2004-01-20 02:29 PM

Dave, I loved this one. I think I like
it better than any of yours I've read.
I'm going to keep this one. Hope you don't mind?

Ethel

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

2 posted 2004-01-20 02:31 PM

perfect, Ethel is right, a true

DavePage
Member Elite

since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

3 posted 2004-01-20 02:33 PM

Thanks but all I did was sit down to read poetry and I remembered a very small stream that seemed to be life in a very small but important way

Dave

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

4 posted 2004-01-20 03:07 PM

I remembered a very small stream that seemed to be life in a very small but important way

sometimes it is the small things that are important in life

M

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