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Terrina
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since 2003-12-31
Posts 166
California

0 posted 2004-01-20 11:36 AM


For a moment you were mine
and I’ll cherish that time.
Lying if I said it meant less than it did.
Kid myself by thinking I could have you again.
Grin though as I think of the smile in your eyes
Surprised, of course, that my lips were that soft
Caught off guard by my confidence,
And I, by your intelligence.
I truly believe that makes a man.
I’m a fan my dear, of your handsome mind.
The kind that teaches but never preaches,
I beseech you.
I want to keep you.
The attitude of a gifter with much to give,
Chivalry is not dead in you.
Compliments run through to me.
You see me responding loud and clear,
I can see that much from here.
Let me look at you,
In case I never see you again.
Lying if I said it meant less than it did.


© Copyright 2004 Terrina Reed - All Rights Reserved
Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348
Florida
1 posted 2004-01-20 11:39 AM


Well done!

"sit on top of the world and tell me how you feel...'cause what you feel is what I feel for you.."
~Dido~

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989

2 posted 2004-01-20 11:49 AM


Much enjoyed and very well done, no improvement needed!  
ThUnDeRkYsS
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since 1999-09-23
Posts 727
Wisconsin
3 posted 2004-01-20 12:04 PM


This is fantastic!!  Sounds like a very special guy and a lucky one at that to have the admiration of you

Brian

Strive for higher levels, if they seem out of reach... Grow, and they will get closer.



Terrina
Member
since 2003-12-31
Posts 166
California
4 posted 2004-01-20 12:08 PM


Thank you all.
Specially you thunder

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
5 posted 2004-01-20 12:43 PM


gawd! I've been there and done that! What an inspiring write!
iliana
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since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434
USA
6 posted 2004-01-20 09:23 PM


Terrina, this was very much enjoyed by me.  Good one!
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