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bslicker
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state of mind

0 posted 2004-01-20 08:55 AM


gifts

within cracks of clouds
shines upon us rays

gifts from heaven above
brighting our days.


bernie


A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

© Copyright 2004 Bernard Slicker - All Rights Reserved
J.Samm
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1 posted 2004-01-20 09:06 AM


simple, refreshing and unpretentious. sweet too!
iliana
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2 posted 2004-01-20 09:19 PM


Bernie -- that made me smile!  
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In Your Poetic Mind
3 posted 2004-01-20 10:21 PM


this is refreshing!! almost a breeze of spring air....

~*~
In your light I learn how to love
In your beauty how to make poems
You dance inside my chest where
no one sees you and that sight becomes art

BluesSerenade
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By the Seaside
4 posted 2004-01-22 02:58 PM


It's those unexpected gifts that mean the most.

*Enjoyed*

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Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving
5 posted 2004-01-22 03:06 PM



...subtle simple pleasures

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
6 posted 2004-01-22 03:07 PM


Beautiful Bernie...
Warmed me up on this freezing day.
Hugs~

    In the midst of winter..
I found there lives within me,
    an invincible summer.

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
7 posted 2004-01-22 04:23 PM


You are in an upbeat mood today, Bernie
nice~~
hugs
M

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8 posted 2004-01-22 06:09 PM


Very good writing, my friend.  
Ethel

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