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Charisma
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0 posted 2004-01-20 03:46 AM



Magic moment


View over mountains
This casts a magic moment
How I felt so little
In the hush of golden sunset

Skylines encourage the soul
Spiritual in natural scent
How I bid the night
Not to take over sunset’s delight

Colours of gold and purple blue
Brushed upon evening’s canvas
Mirror sun’s and moon’s tangled light
Exceed glorious hush inside twilight

View over mountains
Breathtaking moment of bliss
How it made me feel so blessed
Cast by nature’s kiss


~*Theresia~*  

© Copyright 2004 Theresia A. Makatita-Poortman - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2004-01-20 03:52 AM


you took me there
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2 posted 2004-01-20 04:17 AM


There is nothing more spectacular than Nature painting the sky at sunset!  Glorious, and you captured it for us to enjoy...thank you for the mental images, my friend!  ~S~

Music washes away from the soul the dust of everyday life

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3 posted 2004-01-20 05:22 AM


this was colourful...vibrant....
*a little holiday for my mind*
very pleasant read!

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4 posted 2004-01-20 09:52 AM


Oh, can I just stay inside this writing?? and NOT have to work today... it sounds like such a beautiful place!  LOL  Great imagery and a vivid picture of something nice comes to mind

Brian

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5 posted 2004-01-20 10:00 AM


Charisma~
Darling lady ... the greatest magic is in seeing you here with such a lovely presentation of thought~

BEAUTIFUL ... just BEAUTIFUL~
Sending special *Huglets* your way~

Don't stay gone so long~
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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6 posted 2004-01-20 10:17 AM


A "Magic moment" indeed !! Lovely. Chris
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7 posted 2004-01-20 10:56 AM


stunning masterpiece of beauty Charisma!  always a joy when you bless us with your words gal.
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8 posted 2004-01-20 10:57 AM



When I come to your neck
of the world,
I plan to have you show me this
and see if what you see matches up
to the beauty of your write.

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9 posted 2004-01-20 12:40 PM


Skylines encourage the soul
Spiritual in natural scent
How I bid the night
Not to take over sunset’s delight

as the entire poem speaks loudly, and stunningly.


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10 posted 2004-01-20 02:51 PM


An exquisite poem M'Lady!
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11 posted 2004-01-20 03:46 PM




(smiles) Yay! Awwwwwwwww, I've missed you sooooooo much, sweet friend, you are one of my favorites here on Passions and it always makes my heart dance seeing your smile on these pages, I hope to see you more often here, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Charisma, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

Charisma
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12 posted 2004-01-21 09:14 AM


passing shadows: Glad you were there too

Sunnyone: thank you dear friend, Nature has so many magic to present us, all we have to do is to enjoy them.

muted: thank you muted

ThUnDeRkYsS: Well dear, I wont stop you to stay here...take your time. Work can always been done *s*

Marge: Always good to see you dear lady and I love those special huglets from you..it always warms my heart

Nightshade:thank you *s*

Gentle Spirit: thank you for the read, glad you enjoy my words here

Karilea: I would be honoured to view with you the beauty of nature.....and I bet we will enrich and enjoy even the very small detaille in our view.

LeeJ:thank you for reading and your sweet reply *s*

Munda: thank you dear lady *s*

Noah: awwwwww you always warm my heart with your enthousiasm and kind words. Thank you dear friend for reading and your always loving and kind words. God bless you

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13 posted 2004-01-21 01:48 PM


Colours of gold and purple blue
Brushed upon evening’s canvas
Mirror sun’s and moon’s tangled light
Exceed glorious hush inside twilight
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lovely lovely...
so good to read you and have you back in the blue pages poetess Charisma.

How foolish must man be, not to be impressed by mountains and trees
not to be brought to his knees by the beauty of the sky and sea

Cherokee Lore

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14 posted 2004-01-21 02:04 PM


Colours of gold and purple blue
Brushed upon evening’s canvas
Mirror sun’s and moon’s tangled light
Exceed glorious hush inside twilight


The best bit, not that it wasn't all amazing.

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