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Magic (a followup to Scorpio's Magic)

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iliana
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0 posted 01-20-2004 01:00 AM       View Profile for iliana   Email iliana   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for iliana


Time never travels so quicky that your face does not appear,
or I feel a pause within . . . without,
as if you were really here.
And words never come so easy that I could say them all
to help you understand me or show love, most of all.
     Most of all.

There really is some sort of magic.  I used to wonder why.
But now I only smile about it.
That secret's best of all . . . best of all.

A part of me is somewhere with you no matter where you are.
Don't take that part for granted --
it will fill you fullest
It's magic!

[This message has been edited by iliana (01-20-2004 03:40 AM).]

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serenities_blood
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1 posted 01-20-2004 01:37 AM       View Profile for serenities_blood   Email serenities_blood   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenities_blood

Iliana.

I see you've replied to many of my poems so when i saw your name i very quickly began to read.
You have a true talent, and your words touched me!
Looking soo fwd to reading more of u soon!
Thanx

xoxLORxox

Who says a woman cannot serve?
It would be my pleasure

iliana
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2 posted 01-20-2004 01:58 AM       View Profile for iliana   Email iliana   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for iliana

Serenities_Blood -- Thanks for posting and for the kind words.  I really enjoy your work, too.  Hugs to you and BEEEEEwell!
Sunnyone
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3 posted 01-20-2004 04:20 AM       View Profile for Sunnyone   Email Sunnyone   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunnyone's Home Page   View IP for Sunnyone

Oh, iliana, I really enjoyed the magic that you penned this one with!!!  You have a wonderful style, and I much enjoy reading...~S~

Music washes away from the soul the dust of everyday life

poetically ghetto
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4 posted 01-20-2004 05:31 AM       View Profile for poetically ghetto   Email poetically ghetto   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poetically ghetto

your magic is alive
i hope to read it all the time
smoothly done
iliana
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5 posted 01-20-2004 11:33 AM       View Profile for iliana   Email iliana   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for iliana

Sunnyone -- Good morning!  Glad you liked it, thanks.  
iliana
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6 posted 01-20-2004 11:35 AM       View Profile for iliana   Email iliana   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for iliana

Poetically Alive -- thanks for reading it!  What a very nice thing to say!  Welcome to Passions  --- I'll be looking out for yours, as well.    
Sadelite
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7 posted 04-12-2004 09:33 AM       View Profile for Sadelite   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sadelite

"Time never travels so quicky that your face does not appear,
or I feel a pause within . . . without,
as if you were really here.
And words never come so easy that I could say them all
to help you understand me or show love, most of all.
     Most of all."

This could not have been expressed more clearly to allow the reader to take the idea and run with it.  It brought back first memories that lingered sooooooooo long.
You have a clarity about your writing that allows images to link on to it very easily.
I enjoyed.
                 Sadie
Enchantress
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Somewhere in time~


8 posted 04-12-2004 12:33 PM       View Profile for Enchantress   Email Enchantress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Enchantress


iliana
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9 posted 04-12-2004 01:07 PM       View Profile for iliana   Email iliana   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for iliana

Nancy, thanks for taking the time to go back to #30 and read this one -- and to post the MAGICAL sign!  
scorpio
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10 posted 04-12-2004 01:22 PM       View Profile for scorpio   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for scorpio

Iliana, I'm pleased that you enjoyed my poem and that it lead you to post this wonderful write.  And I do apologize for not responing earlier.  

believe in what your heart feels...
iliana
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11 posted 04-12-2004 01:30 PM       View Profile for iliana   Email iliana   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for iliana

Scorpio, I had forgotten about my Magic until I read yours.  I had written mine probably 20 years ago, but yours brought it back to life.  Don't you think it's interesting how many different varieties of the same themes.... in some cases even the same titles, there are?!  Thank you for taking the time to read..........I do really enjoy reading your poems.  
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