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DavePage
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0 posted 2004-01-19 05:57 PM


Sitting for his fix of words
He let his heart
Relax

Mind enthralled
Spirits racing
Soult intact

Eyes closed
Weaving vision
In his mind

Feeling spirits move him
Head argues
Was that kind

Floating over limited words
His spirit seeks
People

To ward his vision
Know his words
And their lives enrapt

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Sadelite
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since 2003-10-11
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1 posted 2004-01-19 08:03 PM


Dave,
  
   This is so well expressed, something that many can relate to... Enjoyed,
                         Sadelite  

"Sitting for his fix of words
He let his heart
Relax"

                


  

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