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DavePage
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0 posted 2004-01-19 04:11 PM



She always did like flowers
The Park nevered missed them
On friday nights fish
No matter where I left them
I was always home early
And locked up behind me
I never woke her up
Nor did I let dawn blind me
I always limped on saturdays
Back of the calf for sure
Spinning in the disco
Doing my encore
Giving off the steam
Fooling no-one but me
That I was the greatest
The world has even seen

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A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
1 posted 2004-01-19 04:16 PM


fooling no one but me,
I was the greatest....

I really enjoyed those last two lines~humble is what I got from your words~

~ARH



Open your eyes, open your mind, open your heart, let me come in and show you love.....~ARH

DavePage
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2 posted 2004-01-19 04:26 PM


We all believe we are the greatest when we are younger then the calves ache, the back aches and still we think we are the greatest swinger in town where the world is our piece of sand lodged and irrating

Dave

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