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Intertwined

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JustChris
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0 posted 01-19-2004 02:39 PM       View Profile for JustChris   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JustChris

The logs of the fire
Crackling in ernest
As I lie before
This bank of warmth

The lights are out
Yet the candles ..
Wicks, wax
Intertwined
A fusion of beauty

The golden glow
Eminating from the hearth
Matches the golden aura
Of my lover

We both lie together
Breathing as one
Asleep on the rug
Our bodies side by side
Our hearts intertwined, beating
As one  

© Copyright 2004 Christopher Andrew Quail - All Rights Reserved
DavePage
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1 posted 01-19-2004 04:04 PM       View Profile for DavePage   Email DavePage   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for DavePage

Very sensitive very nice

I liked the flow

Dave
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2 posted 01-24-2004 08:25 AM       View Profile for Margherita   Email Margherita   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Margherita

I think your heart speaks beautifully, dear Chris! This is so lovely.
Love, Margherita
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beautiful
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4 posted 01-31-2004 02:18 PM       View Profile for Michelle_loves_Mike   Email Michelle_loves_Mike   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michelle_loves_Mike

What a scene,,,,thank you for sharing it,,,,
Michelle

I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike

 
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