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DavePage
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since 2003-12-21
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0 posted 2004-01-19 02:18 PM


Bit of a protest this one - followed on from the soldier's words in Duty

Death beneath my blade
A history I can't unfold
Unwinding towards me
Future staring me asking why

What am I but someone's brigand
Symbol of joy and hope
For this slaughter
For this

I want peace
To know peace
To understand peace
Give me peace

And not over the bodies
Of my friends

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the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08
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Jacksonville, Florida, USA
1 posted 2004-01-20 11:14 PM


This is an awesome and strong pice of work. I loved it.

Cold hands means a warm heart

richard taylor
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since 2004-01-13
Posts 136

2 posted 2004-01-21 08:07 AM


Good poem Dave, these things need saying.
regards Richard.

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