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In the Rocking Chair (twenty words or less)

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Sadelite
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Soft
creeking flow
rythyms gentle rocking;
A quenching lullaby;
‘Cross her lap
battles rest.
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iliana
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1 posted 01-19-2004 10:59 AM       View Profile for iliana   Email iliana   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for iliana

Beautiful, C.!
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iliana,
   Glad you liked it.  I was thinking about those far away...
                ~Sadelite~
Martie
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Sadelite

The rhythm of rocking and laps....a place of peace and for gathering strength.  I enjoyed this!
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Martie,
  And I enjoy the sensitivity of your writing...  Thank you for your sweet comment.
               ~Sadelite~
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Very fine intresting short poem which I
liked a lot, well writern.
take care Richard.
DavePage
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Very deep, very, very deep

You could write your own dreams reading it

Dave
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Richard,
   Thank you for your interest in this little ditty.  It came to me about 4:00 am. in the dark, hoping that I could read it in the morning!  Glad you like, Richard.
           ~Sadelite~

Dave,
    Yes, you are right.  It is fairly deep with subtle play on words.  Glad you enjoyed.  Write all the dreams you like...
                     Sadelite
  
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sweeeeet!
 
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