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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2004-01-19 07:37 AM


Fireflies of the Mind

I’ve seen the firefly chum my eye
O’er a rainbows awesome sky
Skim me from a wallows rim
And swim me o’er a wile of whim

And there I’d ride a phantoms horse
Within a fantasy of course
And gallop down the glory road
To a wonderlands abode

The stage would light with candle bright
Banish all realities blight
Bail me out a whimsy’s sail
And fill desires empty pail

And they’re within illusions file
I’d live my fantasies of wile
Reign a Cheshire wend of prime
Until the very end of time

Beside me would the fairest dove
My Angel and my Queen of love.

© Copyright 2004 Seymour Tabin - All Rights Reserved
Susan Caldwell
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1 posted 2004-01-19 08:11 AM


Morning Sy!!



"sit on top of the world and tell me how you feel...'cause what you feel is what I feel for you.."
~Dido~

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2 posted 2004-01-19 08:23 AM


You are one lucky fellow, y'know?

scorpio
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3 posted 2004-01-19 08:44 AM


Ride on, Sy!!!  

believe in what your heart feels...

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4 posted 2004-01-19 09:29 AM


Beautiful Sy!
~Smiles, hugs, & tea, Nancy~

    In the midst of winter..
I found there lives within me,
    an invincible summer.

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5 posted 2004-01-19 10:09 AM


Hi Ho Silver! Ride that phantom horse to dreamland Seymour and bring us back more awesome writings! Cinnamon toast is almost ready! hugs, Chris
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6 posted 2004-01-19 10:36 AM


Seymour~
Such a beautifully wistful thought-ride~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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7 posted 2004-01-19 10:44 AM


g'mornin' gentle heart!



I do believe you are the sexiest poet at Pip!

muah!


Martie
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8 posted 2004-01-19 11:17 AM


Sy...even without the horse, you fly!  
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9 posted 2004-01-19 11:21 AM



  I'll second that... Enjoyed.
                     ~Sadelite~

Seymour Tabin
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10 posted 2004-01-19 12:51 PM


Susan  
Good morning sweet.

Sunshine,
I know.

scorpio,
I'll do my best. hugs

Nancy,
Morning dear.

Chris,
Thank you love, Hugs.

Marge,
Huglets back princess.

serenity
Then may I add your favor?

Martie
My horse has portable wings. :squeze:

Sadelite,
Thank you and hugs for the day.

suthern
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11 posted 2004-01-19 04:01 PM


And there I’d ride a phantoms horse
Within a fantasy of course
And gallop down the glory road
To a wonderlands abode

The stage would light with candle bright
Banish all realities blight

I loved the title... and this is just delightful. *S*

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12 posted 2004-01-19 04:08 PM


this absolutely dances!
oh, what a lovely "spin" im in!
very nice!

Seymour Tabin
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13 posted 2004-01-19 05:08 PM


suthern
My pleasure to delight.

muted
Enjoyed your coment.

jaicie114
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14 posted 2004-01-19 05:31 PM


Dear Seymour...

You provide such exquisitely "fantastical" places in which we may escape!  Thank you!

Love and Light...jc

This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light.

LngJhnAg
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15 posted 2004-01-19 05:35 PM


Well done, Sy!  A terrific tribute.
iliana
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16 posted 2004-01-19 06:22 PM


I sure do like this fantasy, Seymour!  Fireflys have always seemed magical to me.  
Seymour Tabin
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17 posted 2004-01-19 07:53 PM


jaicie114
And there is no charge. LOL

LngJhnAg,
Thank you buddy.

iliana,
To me too.

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