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A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart

0 posted 2004-01-19 07:20 AM





Just one drop flavors the tongue of your heart,

Within that single drop grows desire, passion, loves taste,

Addicted you become, wanting more, heart cravings,
that must be filled,

One drop is all it takes, one taste of my love,invades all logical thoughts,

You become addicted to my love, the emptiness can never be satisfied,

More, more, your heart is consumed by my love,
growing larger in size,

Wanting, needing, pleading, for more love, passion overtakes you,

Your body becomes weak, yet the heart grows stronger and stronger,

To fill it you must eat, pieces of my love are devoured in your mouth,

Now I ask, Do you want just one little bite?

One must really stop and think, such a heavy question to ponder?


Open your eyes, open your mind, open your heart, let me come in and show you love.....~ARH

© Copyright 2004 Millette A. (Lester) Addison - All Rights Reserved
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Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving
1 posted 2004-01-19 12:46 PM


well, desire is a "hearty" dish!
...funny how gluttony will always give you a belly ache, but no matter how much love you have (even if ya think you are about to burst) it never gives you a "heart ache".
this one is sweet

DavePage
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2 posted 2004-01-19 03:50 PM


Good to see a nice strong I can dominate by love poem

Most men feel that they can do what they want as long as they have permission

Yea or nea is not my thoughts but to see a strong set of words echoing a lot of reality

Dave

A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
3 posted 2004-01-19 04:08 PM


Muted~ Glad you could see my point~ thanks for coming by and replying~

ARH~

Open your eyes, open your mind, open your heart, let me come in and show you love.....~ARH

A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
4 posted 2004-01-19 04:09 PM


Dave I agree....Thanks for your time and reply~ most men do think that way!

~ARH

Open your eyes, open your mind, open your heart, let me come in and show you love.....~ARH

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5 posted 2004-01-19 11:37 PM




(sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, I know how you feel as sometimes desire can consue one too much and it can hurt and we need to know how to temperate the feelings within! (big angel hugs) This is very heartfelt, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

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