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the_loner_23
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Jacksonville, Florida, USA

0 posted 2004-01-18 11:51 PM


I am done with you
You have long gone away
I am sick of your leaving
And coming back saying
You are here to stay

I am done with you
I don't love you anymore
Even though you say
You still love me
Until you die
I know it is all a lie

I am done with you
I am sick of the hurt
And the pain you caused me
So step off and leave me be

I am done with you
And that is all I have to say

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~This I wish I had to give to Greg when the liar dumped me. The thought of him still ticks me off.

Cold hands means a warm heart

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ThunderMage
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1 posted 2004-01-18 11:55 PM


Your poem told him the same thing I'd tell him and a few other enemies after wasting them.

What is life without poetry and adventure?
"Little sister" is just another way of saying "Guardian Angel"!

Mistletoe Angel
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2 posted 2004-01-19 12:04 PM




(big angel hugs) Greg sure sounds like a hypocrite, dearest friend, that's right, turn your back on him and just wish him happiness on his own but you never have to have anything to do with him again! (sigh) I send angel healing hugs your way, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Julie, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

Michelle_loves_Mike
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3 posted 2004-01-19 01:11 PM


Kapow! that one would hit any love um, leave um, toy with um, loser smack between the eyes
Michelle

I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike

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