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Open Poetry #30

Your Ghost Blows In

EverRuss
Member

since 2003-12-31

Posts 66
Indiana

0 posted 2004-01-18 10:47 PM

I retrace the steps that lead to the field
The flurries are blowing down
Eastern Winds tell no yield
The cold is forcoming
It is so dark its beautiful
i want you here under spacious skies
For this moment before i retrace my steps Back
I am alone with your thought
I am at peace

If my poems could talk they would mean more than the words

Russell

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

1 posted 2004-01-18 10:56 PM

The sensation of the eastern winds...effective backdrop.
Pretty write. TD

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

2 posted 2004-01-18 11:01 PM

That sounds like love to me! Enjoyed this.

lovejunkie
Member

since 2003-12-31

Posts 93
Indiana

3 posted 2004-01-18 11:06 PM

You really set a mood in the poem. It's calming and sweet. It shows you're a romantic kind of guy!

I like this as much as i like the rest of your poems. good work.

-Steph

"All you need is love..." -The Beatles

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2004-01-19 04:41 AM

I know the feeling...very powerful write

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