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Open Poetry #30
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Juju
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In your dreams
0 posted 2004-01-18 09:30 PM

I am trying/ finding my own style.... This is kinda like 2 poems in one. Last line goes with both.

Remembering your last few words
                     Those words you said to me.
They echo ever constantly.
                     They were only for me
But they are still ever clear.
                     A treasure in my heart....
"I hope all your dreams come true"
                     Believe me, so do I,
        (because all I dream is you)

-Juju-
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skyshine
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Beneath the northern stars
1 posted 2004-01-18 10:16 PM

Interesting style!

~sky

Hold on, if you feel like letting go
Hold on, it gets better than you know....
~Good Charlotte
McLean
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since 2004-01-05
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state of marital bliss
2 posted 2004-01-19 06:34 AM

Looks as though you are on your way to finding it!  Great write.

McLean
Juju
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In your dreams
3 posted 2004-01-19 07:02 PM

thank you
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