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BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

0 posted 2004-01-18 07:07 PM

We happened upon the same place
in a strange way
after the storm passed
landing on the same side of the fence
that seems familiar
more comfortable than before
there are no warm embraces
or terms of endearment
no staking claims
but our arms are still open
our sleeves worn and weary
and I know without asking
there is a fire inside
burning warm in the winter
resting assured
life revolves around the seasons
for no other reason than this~

Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

1 posted 2004-01-18 07:11 PM

This is good to see, my friend. Everyone needs it, and I'm glad to see what I see in this poem.

You're an excellent writer, blues or not. Keep it up!

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Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

2 posted 2004-01-18 07:22 PM

Lori...this feels good and made me smile. Thank you for that.

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

3 posted 2004-01-18 07:23 PM

Ahhhh...for no other reason than this.
Placed as a leaf among the wind.
Smiling at you Bluesy. TD

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

4 posted 2004-01-18 07:28 PM

I know what you mean, and what a fine write this is. hugs.......jo

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

5 posted 2004-01-18 08:50 PM

sounds like a breath of sanity, which we could all use once in a while
very nice, blondie, nice to see you here

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

6 posted 2004-01-18 09:15 PM

(smiles) Awwwwwwwww, and remember always that in the winter there are rainbows that can be seen through the morning lights and prisms of the icicles! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lori, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

7 posted 2004-01-18 09:16 PM

Very nicely done Bluesy lady. Enjoyed. Chris

"When someone loves you, the way they say your name is different. You know
that your name is safe in their mouth." Billy - age 4

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

8 posted 2004-01-18 09:20 PM

"and I know without asking
there is a fire inside
burning warm in the winter
resting assured
life revolves around the seasons
for no other reason than this~"

Ahhh I really nice 'feel good' poem.
Love it Bluesy!
Hugs~

In the midst of winter..
I found there lives within me,
an invincible summer.

jaicie114
Senior Member

since 2003-09-27

Posts 750
On the edge of forever

9 posted 2004-01-18 09:32 PM

Very nice, Bluesy...thank you!

Love and Light...jc

This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light.

Larry C

Member Patricius

since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

10 posted 2004-01-19 12:16 PM

Hey Bluesy girl,
You just keep writing excellent stuff I see. Miss you and still love your writing. It's nice to see your pretty smile. And I love seeing you in print.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

11 posted 2004-01-19 04:36 AM

isn't that the truth! awesome piece!

McLean
Member

since 2004-01-05

Posts 484
state of marital bliss

12 posted 2004-01-19 06:06 AM

This was a fun read, Light, airy, and sweet.

McLean

Duncan
Member Ascendant

since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

13 posted 2004-01-20 11:21 PM

"and I know without asking
there is a fire inside
burning warm in the winter"

Well, let's get it roarin' cause it's damn cold here between the cornfields!!

muted

Member Elite

since 2004-01-15

Posts 2949
Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving

14 posted 2004-01-21 11:40 AM

i dont know what to say... it just "belongs" right here "in my chest"....you touched my heart with this.....

this was a very lovely read!

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

15 posted 2004-01-21 11:42 AM

Lori gal...you are so beautiful!
This is lovely, and a true

there are no favorite lines in this,
just a belief that this is perfect!

choshi
Senior Member

since 2004-01-01

Posts 1184
New York

16 posted 2004-01-21 01:06 PM

more comfortable than before
there are no warm embraces
or terms of endearment
no staking claims
but our arms are still open

Perfect! What a place to be in....lovely poem. ~C

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