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WHITE ROSE
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA 
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and turned it into soft delight. Fragrance then filled a night with its secrets. The lovely, lonely blossom warmed the quiet night. Now morning's dawny dewdrops rest gently on her veins, and dew seems more like teardrops, Love's last remains. [This message has been edited by iliana (01-18-2004 08:04 PM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big angel hugs) Oh Jo, this is so very sadly beautiful, sweet friend, I send angel comfort hugs your way and to all who experience this fragile loss of love and wish true happiness to come to them all! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Jo, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Noah, this was not written about loss other than the very short life that rosebuds have. It's just how I saw a beautiful blossom and knew its time was ending. How much love the roses give! Thank you for your very sweet and thoughtful response. |
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richard taylor Member
since 2004-01-13
Posts 136 |
iIiana this is lovely, so perfect I would keep it safe it deserves to be read. thanks for sharing and well writtern. take care Richard. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Very beautiful, you look and listen so well. Love, Margherita  |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Richard -- Thank you for your very kind post to this poem! Check your email, please. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Margherita -- Thanks, sweet one -- you do, too! |
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jaicie114 Senior Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 750On the edge of forever |
Very beautiful, iliana...thank you. Love and Light...jc This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Jaicie114 -- Thanks, again. As you can tell, today is a Rose day. |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Love it Only thing I really plant is Roses and trees for the birds to live in Dave |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
this is bitter-sweetly sadly-beautiful |
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McLean Member
since 2004-01-05
Posts 484state of marital bliss |
and dew seems more like teardrops, Love's last remains. Lovely creativity here, although feeling a bit sad...loved it. McLean |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
From someone who lives in the "Rose City", I couldn't agree more. Nice images and flow. Ken Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
and dew seems more like teardrops, Love's last remains. Very, very lovely. Enjoyed. Chris "When someone loves you, the way they say your name is different. You know |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Jo~ This is absolutely GORGEOUS~ How softly you penned the beauty~ My rose garden is a delight to me so I REALLY enjoyed this penning~ Sharing a white rose from my garden with you here~  *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
iliana, You captured this well. I enjoyed this a bunch! ~Sadie~ |
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redheart angrybraids Member
since 2000-04-16
Posts 410honolulu, hawaii |
iliana- i'm onto your point of view, i love this kind of poety, wonderful vision, i'll keep reading your words Kindly, |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
redheart angrybraids -- thanks for your comments. I going to be checking out your writing as well in the next couple of days. |
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