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Open Poetry #30

Again

zenny
Member

since 2002-11-24

Posts 371
Belgium

0 posted 2004-01-18 04:19 PM

We're walking in circels
on the highway of love
Familiar points
disappearing
to soon be seen again

Stop!
This has to stop
we really need to talk
There is a road
for us to walk
alone
or hand in hand

I'm tired of seeing
the same things
all over again
But then...again
this too
is a familiar point
to disappear
and soon be seen...again

MARK V SHELDON
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since 2001-06-21

Posts 3015
In a corporeal internship...

1 posted 2004-01-18 04:23 PM

Maybe it was the topic of circles, but this poem made me think of the lyrics to "Windmills Of Your Mind." I guess the challenge is to transform that circle into an upward spiral to catalyze growth from stagnation...

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iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

2 posted 2004-01-18 07:37 PM

Zenny -- an interesting write -- I liked how you used the word, stop, in the center of the poem.

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