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Open Poetry #30

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LiquidMidnight
Member

since 2003-09-24

Posts 50

0 posted 2004-01-18 03:30 PM

Crown

Sip on the drunkeness that befalls an unfinished thought
A thought that lingers upon her evening sillohette
Scattered somewhere between the taste of black

Her milky being, projected in randon expression
Expression for fallen balance and mysterious midnight
Behind seven tongues in the twin cities of Azreal

For the artist's empires
Hiding in her cool jazz

She is the aesthetic
Yet also the reasoning of

[This message has been edited by LiquidMidnight (01-18-2004 04:05 PM).]

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

1 posted 2004-01-18 03:36 PM

The taste of black brought sadness to an otherwise honoring tribute...as if a bad taste was left in the mouth. Something stated that lingered misunderstood or crossed.
Excellent metaphor and well written piece.
ThisDiamond

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

2 posted 2004-01-18 03:38 PM

Brava, brava!

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

3 posted 2004-01-18 03:59 PM

i like this...to me...it reads like...a love poem...but what do i know?...h

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