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inkedgoddess
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since 2002-11-19
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0 posted 2004-01-18 09:07 AM




It felt like

a new box of crayolas
and all the unnamed
colors of the sunset
were there, lined up
begging to be released
thru the eyes only
a young heart could see
with,

and clean crisp air
when the sun was saintly
and we lay down like
children of god
making angels
as we wore red galoshes,

and hot cocoa and
sneaking freshbaked
cookies out of
your mama's new oven,

and giggling, you
made me giggle
like a silly school
girl, my heart
skipping beats
filled with rainbow
colored caterpillars,

it felt like meeting up again
after a 40 year interval,
but we ended up feeling
like 5 year olds again, anyhow

it felt like we could
truly understand
a word a 5 year old
heart hears, but reallly
can't define at the time,

it felt like.............

Jubilation



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Michelle_loves_Mike
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1 posted 2004-01-18 09:28 AM


Love can make you feel new again, childlike in your approach in seeing all things,,,Isn't it great, to have that new box of crayon feeling?
Michelle

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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2 posted 2004-01-18 10:31 AM


This is wonderful, dear Michelle and I feel like joining you in the dance of jubilation.
Love and hugs. Margherita

McLean
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since 2004-01-05
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state of marital bliss
3 posted 2004-01-18 10:32 AM


So refreshing this is!

McLean

ThisDiamond
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since 2002-02-22
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4 posted 2004-01-18 12:12 PM


So smiling...and passing her the fingerpaints and construction paper...

Boldly go...TD

passing shadows
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5 posted 2004-01-18 12:35 PM


this is adorable...sounds like you're happy
bklynboy
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6 posted 2004-01-18 12:42 PM


Awesome! Brought a smile to my face!
inkedgoddess
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7 posted 2004-01-18 03:29 PM


thanks guys and dolls
for reading

garysgirl
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8 posted 2004-01-18 08:25 PM


Hi Michele....love is grand, isn't it??  
BluesSerenade
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9 posted 2004-01-18 08:38 PM


So happy for you, girlie girl!!!
Big old hugs,  honey~

iliana
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since 2003-12-05
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10 posted 2004-01-19 02:14 AM


And this feels like jubilation, as well!  You bubble with joy, sweet one!
inkedgoddess
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since 2002-11-19
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Ohio
11 posted 2004-01-19 06:20 AM


thanks a bunch love ya all
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