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HopeS
Member Elite

since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

0 posted 2004-01-18 08:31 AM

It Was As Though You Knew

With the various emotions
I have often gone through
The whys and wherefores
It was as though you knew

Giving me your assurance
When I'm melancholy blue
Your voice comforting me
It was as though you knew

Conscious of my thoughts
You never asked for a clue
The fact you seem aware
It was as though you knew

Responsive to your stimuli
Noting as affections grew
In being keenly perceptive
It was as though you knew

Hope©2004

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2004-01-18 08:39 AM

Beautiful, dear Hope. Those who share feelings, DO KNOW, I am sure and you captured this truth through your love and wrote it down beautifully.

Love and hugs. Margherita

HopeS
Member Elite

since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

2 posted 2004-01-18 09:14 AM

Thank you Margherita , yes although we have never met , we have touched in many ways
Hope

Michelle_loves_Mike

Senior Member

since 2003-12-20

Posts 1189
Pennsylvania

3 posted 2004-01-18 10:33 AM

I like this write
,,,,,,and I must say,,,it always seems my Mikey knows
Michelle

I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike

HopeS
Member Elite

since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

4 posted 2004-01-18 10:43 AM

Thank you Michelle for your kind reply ...
yes it becomes apparent our hearts are transparent

Hope

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

5 posted 2004-01-18 05:04 PM

(smiles) God Bless You, sweet friend, this made me smile as I can feel how you feel and that is what friends and loved ones are for, to sympathize with the emotions! (kiss on cheek) Yay, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Hope, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

richard taylor
Member

since 2004-01-13

Posts 136

6 posted 2004-01-18 05:23 PM

Hi Hope,
Now this is good I enjoyed it very much, it is a fine piece of writing. The meter is perfect in form and the style flows and holds true throughout the poem, also some excellent lines and endings.
take care Richard.

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside