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jaicie114
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since 2003-09-27
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On the edge of forever

0 posted 2004-01-18 02:51 AM



You whisper in my ear
A breath...a soft stirring...
I turn, but you are
What?
My imagination, my dream, my self?

My beloved,
how I love you.
How I yearn again for your touch,
For your sweetness to enfold me
and lift me to a higher ground.

My beloved,
You rest...and I seek.
You come with the wind
and the lightning
and the storms.
But, only I hear when you speak
and whisper the words of love
in my ear.
When you kiss my cheek
with the softness of your soul.

You show yourself in the flight
of a butterfly.
You touch my soul with the flowers
you paint.
You speak to me through the songs
of love.

My beloved, how I miss you.
How I crave the beating of your heart.
How I dance with you in my arms
and know you are there,
but no one sees.

My beloved, I embrace you
and you never leave me unfulfilled.
But I want you to return.
To feel
To love
To smile
To truly whisper that you are mine
And I am yours
And this is the way it has been....

from the beginning.

My beloved.

This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light.

© Copyright 2004 Jaicie - All Rights Reserved
DavePage
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Posts 2917

1 posted 2004-01-18 04:21 AM


I like it

Dave

McLean
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since 2004-01-05
Posts 484
state of marital bliss
2 posted 2004-01-18 06:06 AM


This leaves me content and sad at the same time.  I think it is an honorable write, and a sweet person to create the words.

McLean

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
3 posted 2004-01-18 08:13 AM


Such intense longing dear jaicie!
Touchingly beautiful is the voice of your heart.
Love, Margherita

jaicie114
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since 2003-09-27
Posts 750
On the edge of forever
4 posted 2004-01-18 09:46 AM


Dave, McLean, and Margherita...

Thank you so much for your comments...I'm glad you enjoyed the poem...even though it is rather sad. It's just that sometimes...mmmmm...well, you know.

Love and Light...jc

This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light.

Margherita
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Eternity
5 posted 2004-01-18 05:30 PM



ThisDiamond
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Michigan, USA
6 posted 2004-01-18 07:20 PM


Sweet one...
It is often our own imagination and spirit that holds and heals us in the absense...
A lovely write.
TD

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23
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By the Seaside
7 posted 2004-01-18 07:44 PM


Hi jaicie, I especially liked your ending,
"from the beginning"

Good poetry, you~

jaicie114
Senior Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 750
On the edge of forever
8 posted 2004-01-18 08:25 PM


TD and Bluesy...

I'm so glad that you enjoyed this. Thank you for your replies.

Love and Light...jc

This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light.

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