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McLean
Member

since 2004-01-05

Posts 484
state of marital bliss

0 posted 2004-01-17 11:46 PM

MOVED!
I was moved!
Unbeknownst to me,
The poem I wrote this morning
was mistaken as risky.

Kindly it was stated
that my poem fits the decorum
where eyes wander recklessly
to the Mature Content's Insights forum.

I read my poem again & laughed,
"Tell me it isn't so!"
that this moderator read my words
and thought it about my libido!

ROTFL!

Just when I needed one,
this laugh did come to light.
Below is my poem re-worded,
because I want to get this right:

Stress Induced(12-23-22)

Seasoned as pulled and dehydrated cattle meat
Your affectionate attention to me makes my myocardial functions irregular
causing unusual palpitations, altering normal circulatory patterns

McLean

[This message has been edited by McLean (01-18-2004 11:51 AM).]

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

1 posted 2004-01-18 12:19 PM

nice and thank you

~*~
In your light I learn how to love
In your beauty how to make poems
You dance inside my chest where
no one sees you and that sight becomes art

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2004-01-18 01:31 AM

hehehe!

DavePage
Member Elite

since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

3 posted 2004-01-18 02:51 AM

I had one disappear because it was about a colour man's roots and I was referring to his background and home

Another went because I wrote in English English was Gas is something we use for cooking and a Geyser is slang for a guy as well as for heating water

I now remember not to write in London slang although the "Carryon Films" are now taking off in the US but I wonder what Americans make off Mark Anthony telling Cleopatra to get Caesar on his "tod" - tod being slang for "tod sloane" meaning "own".

Dave

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

4 posted 2004-01-18 02:52 AM

LOL -- enjoyed very much!

McLean
Member

since 2004-01-05

Posts 484
state of marital bliss

5 posted 2004-01-18 06:45 AM

Glad everyone's laughing like me. What an amusing thing, the way we can ingest words so differently.

Dave~ You, too? So it's not such an uncommon practice, then. I'm quite flattered that someone thought I was being edgy, because I certainly couldn't be if I tried!

McLean

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

6 posted 2004-01-18 11:33 AM

McLean~
Tee-Hee-Hee ... this quacks me up~

OH, Oh ... your words MOVE me~

Have a good day ... you little scandalous creature you !!

*Huglets*

~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

noles1@totcon.com

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

7 posted 2004-01-18 12:10 PM

GRIN....

dinky
Member

since 2002-10-19

Posts 258

8 posted 2004-01-18 01:15 PM

lol i enjoyed this

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

9 posted 2004-01-18 05:07 PM

(giggles in delight) Hehehe, you little rascal, you! (smiles) This is so creative, sweet friend, I love your wit and charm behind your posts, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet McLean, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

10 posted 2004-01-18 08:50 PM

Must've been the screws!
This is one of those times,
when you just gotta laugh
and bite the beef!

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