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Open Poetry #30

Be calm

Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-29

Posts 7115
South Africa

0 posted 2004-01-17 05:10 PM

Be calm
and know tonight
that even Jesus wept
as upward to his mortal brain
shot energy like thorns pierce flesh and bleed
the way of light to shadows plight
of love in backward flow
and too God said,
Be calm.

Helen

(Whew!  Form writing is too taxing on the brain - back soon to Sunday Stories)

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

1 posted 2004-01-17 05:38 PM

Helen -- AMAZING WRITE and amazing grace!

Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-29

Posts 7115
South Africa

2 posted 2004-01-17 05:47 PM

Thank you, iliana. Life is amazing - I merely take notice. So much to see and feel on this "sweet" ferris wheel.

DavePage
Member Elite

since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

3 posted 2004-01-17 06:33 PM

as upward to his mortal brain
shot energy like thorns pierce flesh and bleed

being very honest trying to write and review when you should be doing so much else is a sod

you are given talent and because you are given talent you can never refuse to use your talent

People read your words and learn they can write words and then they can express their minds that otherwise would bury them and their lives

Dave

Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-29

Posts 7115
South Africa

4 posted 2004-01-17 11:45 PM

Humans are a strange breed - it's considered the "in" thing to hide ones feelings. I merely write about those feelings and thoughts that are so common to us all at some time or other in our lives. I "try" at any rate. Thank you for reading, Dave.

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