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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2004-01-17 11:48 AM



There Is A Light In The Window
~*Marge Tindal*~

There is a light in the window
that greets me on the new dawn
Bids me throw off the coverlet
of my comfort of yawn~

There is a light that invites me
to romp the grasses wet with dew
A light that beckons me play
across the meadows’ soft hue~

There is a light that pulls me
forward into this fair day
A light so bright as to take me through
to the twi-of-night soft in replay~

There is a nightlight in the Heavens
that shines with such delicate rays
Saying to me … day is now history
Close your eyes … I promise I’ll stay
until the dawn once again beckons your smile
into rising to this circle of friends
as the day brings these pages blue
into your view once again~



~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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1 posted 2004-01-17 11:53 AM


Marge  
Wonderful write and a joy to read.

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2 posted 2004-01-17 11:55 AM


There is a nightlight in the Heavens
that shines with such delicate rays
Saying to me … day is now history
Close your eyes … I promise I’ll stay
until the dawn once again beckons your smile
into rising to this circle of friends
as the day brings these pages blue
into your view once again~


So true......thank you, Marge,
for saying what so many of us feel.  


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3 posted 2004-01-17 12:01 PM


Marge/sis...thank you...I can see it from here.  
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4 posted 2004-01-17 12:34 PM


Marge...Smooth as silk and beautiful as a sunset.Enjoyed very much...Paul

"To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you"

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5 posted 2004-01-17 12:42 PM


Marge, I am following the light and know it will lead to a special place!

Wonderful thoughts ... hugs, Marti

I take no credit for my poems. Although I write them, I feel
more like I transcribe them. It's just a matter of listening.


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6 posted 2004-01-17 12:45 PM


Beautiful Marge!
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

    In the midst of winter..
I found there lives within me,
    an invincible summer.

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7 posted 2004-01-17 12:45 PM


"There is a nightlight in the Heavens
that shines with such delicate rays
Saying to me … day is now history
Close your eyes … I promise I’ll stay"

Marge, this is absolutely precious!

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8 posted 2004-01-17 01:22 PM


oh...now this...this is touching...so beautiful
Kristin Eve
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9 posted 2004-01-17 03:47 PM


this poem

   makes
me

hopeful....

"Who you are speaks so loudly...I can hardly hear what you are saying"

DavePage
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10 posted 2004-01-17 03:59 PM


Nice, very under-played, whispering something intimate

Dave

Betty
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11 posted 2004-01-17 07:31 PM


This is so pretty Marge.
Love ya,
Betty

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12 posted 2004-01-18 10:35 AM


Sweet....I needed this to start my day. Thank you, poet lady!

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13 posted 2004-01-18 01:42 PM


Hi Lovely senterment, very fine poem I liked it
take care Richard.

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14 posted 2004-01-18 04:39 PM


Dear Marge:  Light is beautiful, no matter where or when! Loved your poem!

Love
Betty Lou

Betty Lou Hebert

Marge Tindal
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15 posted 2004-01-26 11:10 AM


To share a little *light* with so many friends is one of the blessings of this place~

THANK YOU for each kind reply ...~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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