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Kristin Eve
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since 2004-01-13
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0 posted 2004-01-17 06:36 AM


Within
That humble
crevice

‘neath
your
beautiful head

and above
your
beautiful shoulder

I found the only device
I needed to get through this.

"Who you are speaks so loudly...I can hardly hear what you are saying"

© Copyright 2004 Kristin Eve Phasey - All Rights Reserved
Michelle_loves_Mike
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1 posted 2004-01-17 07:09 AM


A strong shoulder to get you thru,,,,is such a treasure,,,,especially when it belongs to more than a friend, or a family member,,,,

Michelle

I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike

DavePage
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since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917

2 posted 2004-01-17 04:13 PM


Nice emotion

Very subtle

Dave

iliana
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since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434
USA
3 posted 2004-01-18 03:26 AM


Kristin, this was so sweet.  How do we right "comfort?"...... this way.    hugs to you.....jo
McLean
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since 2004-01-05
Posts 484
state of marital bliss
4 posted 2004-01-18 06:29 AM


Strength in this!

McLean

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