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Ladycat
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At the edge and a doorway,TX

0 posted 2004-01-17 05:55 AM


Today is a day of swinging
Like a monkey fron a tree
Flying high and free
I feel something
Yet I feel nothing at all
Why does the world seem greener the days you are here?
So afraid
To feel more than this
To get hurt
To cry
To love
To...
I don't like these feelings that you can't understand
I can't understand then either
I sit here hoping like hell that I don't hurt anyone
Hurt anyone in my wrath
I walk my path alone
Only my tears can comfort me
One minute lonely
The next just fine
Where will tomarrow lead me?

Love,
Ladycat


Dancing is the loftiest, the most moving, the most
beautiful of the arts, because it is no mere translation
or abstraction from life; IT IS LIFE I

[This message has been edited by Ladycat (01-17-2004 07:17 AM).]

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1 posted 2004-01-17 06:16 AM


Today is a day of swing
Like a monkey fron a tree
Flying high and free

Pretty thoughts!  
                ~Sadelite~

Michelle_loves_Mike
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2 posted 2004-01-17 07:16 AM


Being overcome by feelngs you've never dealt with, can scare you straight.
You can't spend your life, fearing pain,,,,either giving, or recieving,,,,
Michelle

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3 posted 2004-01-17 09:13 AM


the unknown is unpredictable
   and we like to have some idea
      of our exsistence ...

   I can relate to days of mood swings and questions. But the answers we seek can not be found until they are asked ...

        ... happy trails!


      great write!

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