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Open Poetry #30

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DavePage
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since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

0 posted 2004-01-17 05:12 AM

You listen with eyes
Seeing emotions

One foot on the floor
You are in love

Heading for a cloud
Your senses listen

For the movement of her hair
Enrapturing

You in a heady perfume
Of pleasure

Strewn
Across nerves

Of blinding colour
And hunger

passing shadows
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1 posted 2004-01-17 05:14 AM

I always love your poetry...

I like this style

DavePage
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since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

2 posted 2004-01-17 05:20 AM

Thanks for your lovely words

Only problem is I get big-headed enough as it is.

What is nice is like today when I work up at 2.30am couldn't get back to sleep and I am able with PipTalk to just let some thoughts flow

regards

Dave

GG
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since 2002-12-03

Posts 3532
Lost in thought

3 posted 2004-01-18 03:12 PM

and you definitely did let your thoughts flow with this...
Can see all your senses here... strewn about beautifully

Always, Alyssa

He was a man of sorrows
...I am a girl of tears.

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

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Canada eh.

4 posted 2004-01-18 03:14 PM

Beautiful thoughts strewn here Dave.
Very much enjoy your style.
Hugs~

In the midst of winter..
I found there lives within me,
an invincible summer.

iliana
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since 2003-12-05

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USA

5 posted 2004-01-18 03:41 PM

ooooohhhhhhh, very hmmmmmmmmm....... sensual.

DavePage
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since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

6 posted 2004-01-19 06:16 PM

I keep getting caught out writing sensual poems but please dont tell anyone (a large grin)

Thanks for some very nice comments

Dave

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